Comments : Two Can Dream As One

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    I'm so happy to see you have posted a new poem! I like the emotions in this write the build up which follows verse by verse. In a way I like the ending of this poem which leaves with yearning; as it doesn't go over board and it values that special moment privately rather then spilling it all out- hope that made sense..keep penning!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely to read a new poem from you, William.