Comments : The Field

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Maple Tree

    The daisy chain line was enchanting! <3

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Maple. I hope all is well with you.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Skyfire

    I also came here to say I loved the daisy line! Something about it just rings beautifully. I think it's wonderfully creative how you not only described the idea of a lost childhood but also used metaphors that spoke to the childlike. Daisies, dreams, and animal friends - the perfect childhood imagination.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Everlasting

    Love the story.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Gracy Judith

    What a beautiful piece Ben! I love the imagery in every single line and the rhyming too. I'm glad it is nominated!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Emi

    Beautiful as ever

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, you slay me sir! Beautiful as ever...

  • 2 weeks ago

    by yogi73

    Love this poem, its imagery and how it returns me to my childhood where imagination runs unbound