Comments : Acceptance

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Lost star

    This is beautifully written :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Not the type of comments that you appreciate but it's always a loss of words when reading your poems. I just wanted you to know I read this and had no idea how to respond to it! I love your work.

  • 1 day ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely. The opening up of someone, resolved at last to be the person they want - or need - to be, and finding that long-sought-for love and companionship from another who, not just accepts, but perhaps understands too.
    I suppose the 'broken floorboards' and 'flabby arms' lines suggest there is still a certain amount of haunting from a miserable past and confidence that is lacking in at least one of these two protagonists, but that is nothing a little time and dancing in skirts won't cure.

    Excellent work.