Comments : Past Denials

  • 1 month ago

    by Hellon

    There's something about writing suicide
    notes that feels right. Perhaps it's the verve
    of being able to showcase written skills that
    will impress people after death occur

    ^^^

    I feel there is a poem here on its own...it stands out from the other stanzas.

    This world we live in now throws contradictions and moves the bar at every corner so we are al confused.

    Nicely done.