Comments : When Hearts Divide

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a perfect little piece of poetry that rolls so fluently and sadly off the tongue if read aloud. I appreciate, too, the subtle rhyming of the words 'moon', 'move', 'you', and 'pull'. Nominated.

    Take care, LS

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Lost star

      Hi Ben, I'm really glad you liked this one, thank you for stopping by!

  • 4 weeks ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    I miss you,
    Like the tide misses the moon
    I miss you. Great line, so simple, yet powerful in the imagination as love is the most powerful pulling force in this world. God is Love, and pulls us to himself.
    Added to My Favorites!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Lost star

      Thank you Ken for taking the time to read and comment!!!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is stunning, beautiful and magical!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by cassie hughes

    A truly beautiful piece which flows off the tongue perfectly. A well deserved front page winner

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Shruti

    Sweet effortless read. Very gentle and beautiful. Congratulations!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Skyfire

    I love this one!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Lost star

    Thank you so much people for your lovely comments :)