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by Ben Pickard
This is a perfect little piece of poetry that rolls so fluently and sadly off the tongue if read aloud. I appreciate, too, the subtle rhyming of the words 'moon', 'move', 'you', and 'pull'. Nominated.
Take care, LS
by Lost star
Hi Ben, I'm really glad you liked this one, thank you for stopping by!
by CRAFTY KEN
I miss you,
Like the tide misses the moon
I miss you. Great line, so simple, yet powerful in the imagination as love is the most powerful pulling force in this world. God is Love, and pulls us to himself.
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Thank you Ken for taking the time to read and comment!!!
by Maple Tree
This is stunning, beautiful and magical!
by cassie hughes
A truly beautiful piece which flows off the tongue perfectly. A well deserved front page winner
Sweet effortless read. Very gentle and beautiful. Congratulations!
I love this one!
Thank you so much people for your lovely comments :)