by Star
Lol, are you sure its better with a map though? |
At least they don't speak back! |
by Ben Pickard
Your first post to the site and I couldn't be prouder! The title ties in beautifully and comically to the main body and so it is used as a 'sneaky fourth line' as Mr Darcy (Michael) told me when teaching me about these forms. |
thank you! you're right , it is more of a syntuit! |
by Emi
Hi Keira and welcome. |
Thank you, Emi. Likewise! |
by Maple Tree
Hello Keira, |
You're right. But sometimes life is just about taking a chance - without maps, unfortunately! Thank you so much! |
I relate to this so much! My family knows I am prone to getting lost if traveling somewhere new, and I usually have to study directions days in advance. A map could come in handy too, just not to read while I'm the one in the driver's seat haha. |
Haha, my family and I've been in situations like that too! That's very true. |
by hiraeth
I need a gps even to go down the street or I'll get lost! Welcome to the site! Hope to see more from you! |
Haha,You're not the only one! Thank you! |
It seems like I was the only person to perceive this poem emotionally? That's the beauty of poetry I guess. What a great start <3 looking forward to reading more! Welcome. A touching poem, for me. |
It can be taken both ways! Thank you! |
by Violet Raven
I enjoyed this poem because it can be taken to mean a lot of different things. As most people have pointed out the face value of the poem itself is getting lost in a car on the way to a certain place. Here in the USA gps' often confuse themselves to where they get lost as well even if you know you are on the right track. |
You're right, it can certainly be taken in two different ways. And we all do the two things: get lost in a car and come to a crossroad. |
by Mr. Darcy
My previous Satnav was so boring, so I decided to overlay the voice with Stephen Fry's. Well worth my pocket money! Now, whether I was lost of not, I had one of my icons with me - he even said, "I think I love you?" At the end of each journey. Lol |
Haha! it's not just me who thinks satnavs sound boring! |
by Brenda
I liked this a lot. You definitely could read this more than one way. Sometimes those unfamiliar roads are the best ones to travel. Never know what adventure waits around the corner. |
Thank you! Yes, exactly, i agree. Life is all about the adventure! |
by Shruti
Somehow really reminds me of The Road Not Taken by Frost, haha! |
I can see that, actually, as it can be taken in a humorous way and in a sadder way. If you take it in the latter way, then it definitely has the same thoughts on paths that you didn't go down! |