Comments : Misty Blues

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Star

    This is something different from you (in a good way), but it has your voice if that makes any sense. The wording makes the feeling so real, this is so powerful!!

    I’m glad to see this nominated.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Lost star

    L9ve love love this, I have been an avid reader of yours and I like reading in this style from you, the formatting is wonderful too, a great way to control the reader saved to fans so I can visit at ones leisure.

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Lovely words, LS. Thank you for reading.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This conjures up the process of a subjects renewal, while travelling through life's journey's. A leap into terrains calling out!
    Miss reading from you!
    Love, light and peace.
    Smile and be merry!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      It's always nice to read people's interpretations of what you have written. I meant it more as life being only good on the margins - that place that you can almost see but not clearly enough for it to matter - where it is 'misty'. But centrally, when you look straight ahead, things are clear and that is where reality can be found.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Ben,

    nice to see a free flow going on here. I like the form of varying length lines and stanzas. It is easy to interpret this as nod to Autumn, with each line/stanza representing an equally varying leaf or seed, but maybe not...

    it could be simply a walk into the garden and the surroundings evoking a 'pause for reflection' Why reinvent what feels comfortable, when those slippers are all we want to wear in the rocking chair by the edge of fireside. Is it not too hot staring into those flames, anyway?

    Nice work, Ben.

    Take care