L9ve love love this, I have been an avid reader of yours and I like reading in this style from you, the formatting is wonderful too, a great way to control the reader saved to fans so I can visit at ones leisure.
It's always nice to read people's interpretations of what you have written. I meant it more as life being only good on the margins - that place that you can almost see but not clearly enough for it to matter - where it is 'misty'. But centrally, when you look straight ahead, things are clear and that is where reality can be found.
nice to see a free flow going on here. I like the form of varying length lines and stanzas. It is easy to interpret this as nod to Autumn, with each line/stanza representing an equally varying leaf or seed, but maybe not...
it could be simply a walk into the garden and the surroundings evoking a 'pause for reflection' Why reinvent what feels comfortable, when those slippers are all we want to wear in the rocking chair by the edge of fireside. Is it not too hot staring into those flames, anyway?