Sunrise (Eintou)

Not sure about this form of poetry, I can’t remember hearing of it at all so will go and do some research on it and perhaps even attempt some of my own!

As for the poem, I feel like this would be a fantastic quote to be typed onto a product that can be in someone’s room. Like a plaque or a cushion or something to wake up to and read that’s every morning as some sort of affirmation for the day ahead.

Lovely to read

Thank you all so much for your comments, I'm a big fan of formed poetry often finding the restrictions a source of inspiration rather than a creative hindrance :)

Lovely imagery Lost star. A picture of an icy crisp dawn.
M :)

I see how this poem is optimistic, but for some reason I felt sadness as well. Maybe I'm taking this way too deep, but just stating "I feel alive today", made me wonder what about yesterday and tomorrow? It's like a temporary feeling that some other day would seem a part of a dream.

I really like it!

I'm not familiar with the form, but I actually really enjoy the way this looks visually as well as the simple optimism, as Mr. Darcy commented.