Oh, crackers! (senryu)

by Keira Pickard   Nov 8, 2020


Infuriating,
unwanted house guests keep on
eating all the cheese.

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Keira Pickard 2020

*a little help from my dad with the title

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  • 1 month ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Like it, obviously you are a chip off the (Excuse the Pun) old block! I burst out laughing, because of bad memories years ago when, indeed, some of our special hand picked cheeses vanished from the tray before we could savor there expensive taste! Our little Girl Kari is now a mature Mum of 44 years old with our two beautiful grandkids, Grayson, and Crosby. I wish you all the Best as your Dad would say. You have some big shoes to follow. Added your Poem to my Favorites.

    • 1 month ago

      by Keira Pickard

      Thank you so much - That must have been irritating! :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Maher

    Lol this made me laugh! Mr Pickard has brought his secret weapon to P&Q it seems, but he's done well :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Everlasting

    I love the title, “Oh, Crackers”.

    Congratulations on the win. This is a very fun senyru to read.

  • 3 months ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Haha, Thank you all so much!

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Well done young Keira on your first win, with a clever little piece (like the cheese :) M

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