All Of It Was Ours

I can see why this won, what a beautiful scene this set, I imagined myself in a country film, and this was the ending scene , perhaps a memory of a character after the Main story has been and gone. I could actually envision the scene around and feel everything you described, I suppose it’s everyone’s dream to have moments like this to hold onto and cherish.

I think this small poem could actually be turned into a movie with a great love story!

Thank you for a peaceful and uplifting piece! I cannot believe I have to admit that I have not read a poem for years!!! My loss!!!

The writer brought out much emotion and did it with a very enjoyable flow. I especially liked the third stanza.

A quality piece of poetry. Congratulations.

Excellent. Congratulations on your win, Dad!

Beautifully penned, Ben! Glad this is nominated.

My favourite line is:
We used the sun to burn the haze that dampened hopes and balmy dreams.

Cheers.
Gracy