Comments : All Of It Was Ours

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Damn you, Luceo - I was so going to nominate this. Not because it is worthy, which it is, but for my man-love for Ben!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Im glad she nominated it now, Michael. I'm a happily married man, don't you know?

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful Ben, glad to see it nominated-

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Dark Lord

    Wow! Such flow. Smooth, and perfect. Definitely worthy of nomination! Loved this.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you very much, Brenda and DL

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Gracy Judith

    Beautifully penned, Ben! Glad this is nominated.

    My favourite line is:
    We used the sun to burn the haze that dampened hopes and balmy dreams.

    Cheers.
    Gracy

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Gracy. Glad you enjoyed it.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Excellent. Congratulations on your win, Dad!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A quality piece of poetry. Congratulations.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Xaque

    The writer brought out much emotion and did it with a very enjoyable flow. I especially liked the third stanza.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I can see why this won, what a beautiful scene this set, I imagined myself in a country film, and this was the ending scene , perhaps a memory of a character after the Main story has been and gone. I could actually envision the scene around and feel everything you described, I suppose it’s everyone’s dream to have moments like this to hold onto and cherish.

    I think this small poem could actually be turned into a movie with a great love story!

    Thank you for a peaceful and uplifting piece! I cannot believe I have to admit that I have not read a poem for years!!! My loss!!!

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Great to see your rainbow over (or below) one of my pieces again!