Spellbound.

by Lost star   Jan 4, 2021




Your poetry seeps
within the spaces between
my soul and sinew
igniting something
I thought dead,
or at least dormant.
The arcs and truths
you display conjure
images of my fingers
tracing the lines of your
body and prose
and half guilty thoughts
tease my mind as
they reverberate
around my cranium.

You have no Idea
of the power of your words,
the literary Siren, who,
without even knowing
beguiles me
to the point of madnes

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  • 5 months ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    The poem pulls you straight in - beautiful imagery.

    • 5 months ago

      by Lost star

      Thank you Jessica im glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    There is much of this I like. The trailing format urges the reader to follow at pace, digesting 2 or 3 word images at a time. It may be me, but the words 'guilty' and 'cranium' seem foreign in a piece that is otherwise wonderful. Also there is a small typo in the last word, unless this is meant to depict 'madness'

    • 5 months ago

      by Lost star

      Hi Mr Darcy, thank you so much for writing such a wonderful comment I really appreciate it!!

  • 5 months ago

    by Star

    I know i say this a lot, but this is really beautiful!!

    • 5 months ago

      by Lost star

      Thank you so much im glad you liked it!!

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