Comments : Spellbound.

  • 5 months ago

    by Star

    I know i say this a lot, but this is really beautiful!!

    • 5 months ago

      by Lost star

      Thank you so much im glad you liked it!!

  • 5 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    There is much of this I like. The trailing format urges the reader to follow at pace, digesting 2 or 3 word images at a time. It may be me, but the words 'guilty' and 'cranium' seem foreign in a piece that is otherwise wonderful. Also there is a small typo in the last word, unless this is meant to depict 'madness'

    • 5 months ago

      by Lost star

      Hi Mr Darcy, thank you so much for writing such a wonderful comment I really appreciate it!!

  • 5 months ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    The poem pulls you straight in - beautiful imagery.

    • 5 months ago

      by Lost star

      Thank you Jessica im glad you enjoyed it :)