Comments : Mirage ( syntuit )

  • 1 week ago

    by Maple Tree


    Very pretty visual!!

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I think the change from haiku to syntuit was the right decision on balance. The last line and title tie in perfectly for that 'ohhh' moment!

  • 1 week ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Like the fighter jet
    view of the desert lagoon
    it was gone too soon
    My rhyming one is ok, but your one is so much better! :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Keira Pickard

      I think you should post that :)
      Thank you!

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Keira your writing is right on par. I agree about the Synuit, it works perfectly.

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written. Beautiful imagery.
    Milly x

  • 1 week ago

    by Emi

    This is an absolute treat to read.

    Well done.
    Em x

  • 5 days ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I meant to comment on this sooner but well done with this syntuit, and the imagery in such few words. Always look forward to more of your work!

  • 2 days ago

    by hiraeth

    An excellent syntuit.