Comments : Blue Line

  • 3 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Miss Fred sounds like she takes other people's belongings!?

    This is an intriguing poem. I do like the bookend rhyming stanzas, like a sandwich of curiously tastly filling.

    I'd love to know more...

    • 3 months ago

      by Oceanloveisland

      Thank you very much. I'll see what I can do over the weekend.

      Miss Fred likes cats too. :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Jack

    This is a great poem. I wish it went longer! Tells a nice little story!