Comments : Faking

  • 5 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like how you've presented this and I enjoyed the flow and rhyme. As for the content, it felt like life running away before it's given time to slow down and take stock of what's important.

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  • 4 months ago

    by 1SP

    My sister, anthesis in this poem is truly wonderful. I cannot help to see her smiling with a mic in her hand with colorful nails but behind closed doors I see the mic casting a shadow over back as she puts her face in her hands... This give me a horrible feeling inside. It's that "nothing you can do" feeling. The hopeless feeling. One thing that is worse than the "too late" feeling is the "never was there" feeling. Thank you for this poem. It's inspiring! After reading this I realize that I have a lot of to do, sis. Here you go like number four.