Comments : Lucky To Have Loved (Alphabet)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kate

    This flows so well that it doesn’t even feel it’s an entire alphabet. I love how raw it is, the emotion weaved into every line. It paints a wonderful picture, raises a lot of questions and really makes your heart ache.

    “Sometimes I think of when we
    Tangoed under moonlight
    Until the stars went to bed, now
    Visions are all I hold inside
    When all else seems dead
    X-ray my heart and all
    You'll see is you”

    These lines in particular hit me really hard. Reflecting on a past memory, maybe one you hold dearly, and knowing that time has moved the two of you in different directions. Yet the person still holds a permanent spot in your heart. I love it. Jealous of how effortlessly you wrote it.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Lost star

      Hi Kate, as always I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad you liked it and I have to say your assement of it is spot on. It is interesting to see how people read and for want of a better expression absorbe a poem :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Meena Krish

    Nicely done! All the alphabets been used without any interruption to the rhythm, flow and the feelings, deep feelings..

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Lost star

      Hi Meena, thank you so much! I'm really pleased you liked it :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats on the win!!