by Amberinaa
Im speechless. it was so good!! |
by lonelynow
I dont know what to say! this is so beautiful, you are so talented. i LOVE the last line, and the way that you hint at your own problems, but still your own contentedness, its so beautiful, but so sad, and i'm getting muddled up! i usually only like sad poems, but this is so amazing, i've bookmarked it..(that means alot). thank you so much for writing something so .. beautiful! |
You've captured the essence of everyone having problems very nicely. Look around and there's always those less fortunate than ourselves. Great write. |
by SaveMe?
Aww that reallly sad =[ |
Wow...this is one of the best poems i have ever read and its so truthful very awesome.also thank you for your comment *~Brittaney*~ |
by Mr M
Very astute and well written... |
Through my window, I can see |
by mossgirl19
WOW! This is absolutely a stunning write and I'm adding this to my faves. I like its simplicity and its heart-touching message. |
by Koan
I truly enjoyed this read!!!! |
by Ink
Beautifully written :) |