Comments : Birds, Batteries, Airplanes.

  • 13 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Every vein that runs though your entire body
    Throbs and pulses for the familar feeling of me.
    [[I love this line... It speaks so much truth.]]

    And off the record, the B side is what's currently being played.
    [[Haha. Again with the truth. Touche!]]

    The reality in that statement is like pressing tongues to batteries
    [[Wow. That cracked me up. I did that once...but, with my finger, not my tongue, and hey baby, it hurt. Scared me too. It IS just like putting your tongue to a battery! =O]]

    Ignorant at best whil playing the role of a trend setter
    [[While*. And. I love this line.]]

    God, sweetie. I love your writing. It's always amazing.
    As you can see, I always like to pick out my favorite line in a poem. The one that sticks out to me the most.
    And bravo, you've got several. There are certainly more, but those are the ones that got my attention the most.

    You're an amazing writer; you put your words on paper thinking it's horrible, but it's really the best thing I've ever read.


  • 13 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    "And it takes fifty photographs just to produce a good two.
    The reality in that statement is like pressing tongues to batteries
    And letting the metallic taste see your ego through. "

    ^^. Made me smile.

    It pisses me off how much you wrap things together. [That's not a bad thing, mind you.] Your poetry has this "certain depth" than no one else can produce.

    Wanna know how I'm feeling, Ian?

    Jealous. 5.0/5