Comments : Biscuit

  • Lol lorenzo biscuts?? i have to give that a 5/5 tho just because its about biscuts

  • 12 years ago

    by Mr M

    Hahahahaha...a most unusual poem indeed. I loved it. So well written in its double meaning.

  • 11 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked it so much...It was so weird but so funny...keep it up..good job5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    OH this is a good one simply delicious 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah

    Lol. This poem is very unique. I would never think to right about something like that but i love it.

  • 11 years ago

    by adroit

    Ha-ha! Really funny poem. Lol...We call them cookies, but I'm versatile. Great writing. Keep it up. Honest Luck

    Sarah

  • 10 years ago

    by Kuro

    Lol. i didn't realize it was about bizcuts until i was half way done.

    made me laugh. ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    Your poem is strangly personal to me because of the fact that my nickname at school is biscuit. Now I know that a biscuit in london is very different from a biscuit in the states but still you had me blushing, so thanks for that. Also this poem felt like you were talking to your sweetheart and that made your poem all the more injoyable to read.

    Thanks for giving me goosebumps.

    >~Spirit~>

  • 10 years ago

    by Mister 47

    It iwas the frist time i see a definition of a biscuit like this !! you made me hungy >.<

    waht a great poem , but i would seperate the stanzas more the blocks still are a bit big other then that nothin i open my mouth too than to eat it ^_^