This is a really touching poem, i love little kids, they're so inocent and if you look closely you can learn so much from them.
take care x

This is a really good poem and i liked it a lot. You are a really good writter

This made me wanna cry....beautiful. this little girl is blessed to have such a loving uncle! <3

OMG... I love this and I am sorry...

Oh, My Goodness.
I started crying. This poem really touched and called out to me. I am truly happy to know that such a little girl has such a loving and caring Uncle like you. <=]
I hope that if she reads this, she'll be able to understand. You're a strange character when it comes to writing but you're so full of emotion when you write. It blows me away.
This was Wonderful and So full of emotion.
I Literally Cried.
You've Got a lot of talent. Keep it up.

-Ally

Aww brang tears to my eyes, goodjob.

Whew...it's hard for the heart not to be crumpled by reading this. Real situations bring powerful poetry. A very sad situation for the little girl. But I think she has grown up strong now since this was nine years ago.