I know I have quite a few poems, but it would be great to get some comments on some of my earlier work too..? I like helpful critique, though not nasty ones, so be honest, but be tactful!! :-) If all else fails, my featured poems are probably the ones I like the most :-) |
Through my window, I can see
A world that isn't pleasing me...
Friendship is something that cannot be broken.
Honesty's wanted, but often unspoken...
The rain is falling down on me
But only silver raindrops fall...
Lying on concrete, the flower thrives.
New hope, every time strangers walk by...
Quietly, she walks alone,
And gently tilts her head...
It's been a while since I've written here,
About you. Who'd have thought a...
A mighty wind caressed her dreams,
With swirls of wanton air...
Surprising, how it all feels now.
Shocked how it could turn out...
How easy is it to fall?
How relaxed do you make me feel...
How does the grass look more luscious?
How is the sky clearer blue...
Missed for a lifetime; |
Sooner or later, everything needs to be dealt with. The longer it's left, the worst the repercussions, the sooner, the longer there is to adapt; move on. |
Just because you hide over the hill to cry, |