Comments : Venting.

  • 16 years ago

    by HurtandBroken

    Wow. This pretty much sums up how I'm feeling right now. I've definitely been thinking about something so much that it's taken over my mind, caused me to feel so much pain that I can't breathe, I feel like I'm screwing up, I can't stop crying, and I feel like I just want to curl up and die. I also feel like I'm dying, I'm crying so much, the pain is too great, I can't breathe.
    And you know what's causing all of this?
    My boyfriend, whom I live with currently, is going to move to a different state. I'm trying to talk him out of it but so far nothing is working. So all of this is happening.
    Whatever happened to you, I'm willing to listen. I'm here if you need to talk or vent more.

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Very powerful, relatable emotion, i hope things are better for you now. thanks for commenting my poem btw ;-)
    ~anthony

  • Wow, this poem left me speechless. This was a really great poem. I hate feeling like this. 5/5<---wish I could add way more to this.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I like it
    I think it's just one of those things where your in a situation and you get home and you just write and vent all of your feelings into a piece and your mind doesn't think how will this sound or how will this fit but it just wants all of the bad energy out nice poem
    5/5
    kaila