Comments : Homesick

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This is an amazing poem and i can relate to each and every line.. it makes me feel better knowing im not the only one thats homesick...

    I'm packed up and I'm ready to go,
    When it's still days before I depart,

    excellent line.. sums it up right there.. packed and ready to leave but all that's left to do it wait.

    AMazing job. 5/5 =)