Wow, interesting and so unique. Wonderful collab. the story was so enchanting and enjoyable I read it twice. The 3rd and 4th stanzas were my favorite. The flow was immaculate throughout and excellent for a first-time collab. Wonderful dark poem well done the both of you!

Wow. this is one of the best collabs i have ever read. amazing. it paints an interesting picture. thanks also for your comment.

butterfly kisses and bear hugz

Now that was something else, soo symbolic love it

I love this poem, two heads are better than one. 100%

This is certainly very good. Very captivating!

So dark but impressive...loved the way u wrote it..keep it up5/5