This is really good! Great Job!
xoxox..
amber.xXx

Wow emma this poem will really touch your heart. keep up the good work cause you just never know how many people you inspire just with those simple words so thanks. Keep Writing <3

Awww i love it =]

I love it. its exactly how i feel in my current relationship.

This poem was moderately deep. The concept was very well written out. I felt the message you were trying to send through this! Talented piece of art here. The flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

.. very beautiful n touching poem.. gud piece of work... 5/5

That is so true! i can totally relate.. i alwayss tell myself that im not gonna cry but i always end up crying a river .
heh .
great job .
:)

Really..nice and cute poem :) loved

Aww!!!..i totaly love it!!..great job hun!!!
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***aLy**
5/5

Really good
keep it up

Reminds me of a song called fighting..."i said i'm okay, but i know how to lie."

genuinly wonderful

Excellent!

I liked it. It was very sad piece. I could feel the emotions and I like the contractions, the message and simple rhymings.

Keep it up!
Veamm

#1

Contradiction can really make an excellent poem and this truly proves it! This cannot be faulted. 5/5