Comments : Offering

  • 9 years ago

    by No one

    I reallly like that idea of the rhetorical questions that no-one can truly answer, you missed the word 'do' in the 2nd line of first stanza! =D

    Other than that, I really like it!! *favorites*

    Love you,
    xxxxx

  • 9 years ago

    by JEFF

    Great write, loved it. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lemma

    I love the repetition and the use of opposites. The flow is great and so is the rhyme. My favourite stanza is the last one, it's a great way to end with the feeling of either being safe forever or just falling. 5/5

    Em xXx

  • I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

    ily~ur bff
    cassie

  • 9 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Okay so this on is a awesome! i loved it! Wonderful way of putting questions that everyone wants to ask into a simple poem. It was an amazing read that flowed very nicely. You did great, on everything, the rhymes, flow, word choice, okay, you get it! lol keep it up! :]

  • 9 years ago

    by noha

    Waw , i love it, realy nice work5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very interesting piece. I loved the way you worded it and the vocabulary you used. Again, the flow was flawless. This piece is simple, but expressed so much. Another amazing piece. 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very beautiful poem... It's emotional and the words portray such a beautiful feeling. The flow was great... and the concept is common, but never old. I really love this poem! 5/5