Comments : The Only One (Acrostic)

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow I get to be the first to comment on your Acrostic. What a touching and heart felt write.

    Over and over it plays without you here with me.
    Not knowing why you left, brings me such pain,
    Loving you is torture, too much to even explain.
    Yet I still love you, and it seems I always will,

    I really loved these lines. Great job Bryan !!!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I really like it and is very easy to relate to, nice job on flow, personally i thing acrostic seems to have choppy flow but this one didn't great job.