Good job you got more coming you should
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Very good poem. 5/5

This was really moving and i loved reading it. i had a drug addiction so this opened my eyes a little. well done 5/5 xxx

OMG baby girl... this made me almost cry... You have quite a way with words... *wipes a tear from my face* great job... keep writing :) you have a way of placing emotions in your poetry like I do