Comments : Hi....It's Your Conscience here

  • 9 years ago

    by halie

    Wow
    great poem
    i loved it
    5/5
    :]

  • 9 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Woow, i loved this poem alot. very unique indeed.

    *Must of had a happy pill, why am I helping you
    I'm not here to make you feel better
    My job is to make you sad and blue*

    really love it

  • 9 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    F learn from them you fool
    This is the hardest job i have ever had.

    This says it best, a conscience is a good thing but impossible to turn down the volume.
    Good flow, good subject

  • 9 years ago

    by Luke

    Is really neat and that is like something pulls some one down and you know its your conscious...

  • 9 years ago

    by minh

    It was good, i personally don't fit the poem, but it gave a clear image. 5\5

  • Hahahaha... i like it... its kinda funny but at the same time everyone can relate to it... you know... man yo do have an imagination

  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOWWWWWWWWW I MEAN WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    I usually single out a part that I really
    like more than the rest but every word
    is a WOWWWWWWWW Your best yet
    I M ADDED to my list of fav, poems
    thanks for still excellent piece cy

  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    AGAIN WOWWWWWWWWW
    Ilove it

  • 9 years ago

    by Nobody

    Whoa your so talented i loved it! it was funny and catchy yet you still sensed the meaning of manning up to your mistakes and trying to live better truly amazing! 5/5 xxxxx <33