Wow, the stanza you used...the words you chose. It's another amazing poem! I love this one so I'm adding it to my fav's. You sent an amazing vision out to us.! 5/5!

So true and so many other people need to realise that things you have.....i give it a 5/5

Thanks so much for the comment =D
i like this poem
it wasnt exactly my style but it really had a lot of emotion in it and you really seemed sincere
good job =)
4/5