Oo...its so sweet! i love it! although i like the second stanza more because it rhymed and flowed a little better. Like the third stanza could be:

He makes me smile
Reminds me constantly of the day we met .
He tells me wonderful things,
That I'll never forget.

or

He makes me smile
when all I really want is to cry.
He tells me wonderful things,
Wishing we would never have to say goodbye

just a thought...it might flow better

I know exactly how it feels to have someone like this. This is really sweet and full of honest emotion that I love and is about a subject that I can really relate to. Flow was great,

5/5

Em xXx

Aw... this was so sweet and honest you can tell your feelings are real my favorite parts were probably

"he makes me smile
when all i really wanna do is cry"

"i'd be lost without him in my life
good thing he is all mine"

"together we have each other
forever and always"
the last line simply because always and forever means alot to me

but i really enjoyed reading this you did a great job bravo

Very nice free flow delivering great romantic sentiment

Again, generic and slightly obsessive.

Short and sweet, this is all-and-all a great poem. You capture the mood of what it's like to be in love. My favorite part was this:

"Together we have each other,
Forever and always."