by Baby Rainbow
So short and strong, well done |
by StandStill
((psh! only 1 comment!!! what's up with THAT?! ^.^)) |
by she
This paints a picture of pure desperation and agony, you chose very good words |
by Sourav
Very interesting title. That made me read this poem. In short you've described very strong emotions of life. Hunger... pain... suffering... |
by Cassie Cain
Nice...great poem, keep up the good work. (^_^) |