Comments : The flower.

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is very touching from the beginning to the end. You managed to portray exceptional beauty that made me smile. Very captivating piece, filled with an amount of greatly expressed emotions.
    Honestly, I don't like the description "it's falling over like a pancake tower', it somehow threw me off 9of course, that is just my personal opinion.)
    All in all, this is very captivating and vivid piece.
    Keep writing!