Wow that was amazing. the flow of it and the words you choose. . . You wrote this with your heart, i can tell good job 5/5

Aww it's sad..
n i love it..
so like OMG..
yuh knoe wat i mean.. =]

..ouch!..just like what others have said, its sad..but anyway, i liked this poem, or so i say..i "love" it..5/5:)

Wowie. those are some horrible situations.really made me think about it.
good job (:

Oh hunny this poem is absolutly amazing . your really good !but i really like this poem because its has a true meaning and for sure it fantastic...5/5 :)

This poem is so true. Peopls just need to donate money to people that you kno for a fact could use it. Great Poem.

5/5

I really like this poem. And what you say is true. Its time for people to stop being so judegemental. Take soem time and get to know them, then you can think whatever. Dont judge before you get to know them. You could be that one person that helps me throught their situation. You never know. Great poem.

This is a great poem.5/5
**harlea

Great job making a point. so true and people need to realize that too. 5/5

Excellent sentiments, for which I applaud you! But there are a couple of parts of the rhyme scheme and the rhythm that I found a little jarring. But don't take this as any kind of negative to what you've achieved here, as amongst the morass of "my life sux" and "im so sad" poems, this is a guiding light that the emo crowd should read and be ashamed of themselves because of.

Aww wow that was good...:)Definitely pulled on the heartstrings,and you really did good on getting the point across

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL BUT SO SAD!!!! It brought tears to my eyes! Every Stanza was even better then the last! If you were right in front of me right now i would so give you a round of applase and i would be crying too lol...thank you for sharing such a inspiring poem! if people dont see what this is trying to say, they are clueless!!!

Amazing!!!

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5/5!!

Wow thats pretty powerful stuff there i think you might get some where with that. it opens eyes and make you think.

That was amazingly very good actually im speechless alot of emotions it was sad but a great work of art....
5/5
Fantastic Job!!!

Wow thats so sad, but i love it
there were so many emotions
i can tell you put your heart into this
keep it up girl!

This is very moving, but i have to admit i change the channel when those commercial come on b/c i don't exactly have enough money to help those children, when i'm older and make a salary i definately help atleast one, but that's the thing, there are always more, it doesn't seem fair to only help one, anyway, this is amazing and will hopefully open people's eyes, 5/5

This poem flows so well together, it was beautiful but yet so sad. this is very inspirational!!

very nice job

5/5

I like thz one u r very talented.. .:)

This is really good but really sad... Mainly because it really does happen.. So many people walk away when they can easily help even jut 50 cents could make a huge dfference with someone and everyones to greedy to share a little... great job

Wow, this is so amazing I don't even know what to say.

5/5

Fantastic job!!!