WOW!!!!!!!! im blown away by this poem!!!!! its so amazing and beautiful. i could really feel the words and the meaning. this poem captured me and i felt as if i was put in your shoes as your wrote this. great job!

And again, I'm amazed by your talent. The imagery in this was astounding, you couldn't have described silence better. The fifth line especially, it was crazy. Like... wow.
I hope you won/win the contest!

Amazing poem...will win for sure...5/5