I'm not sure if this is the right category to place the poem in but it's a good effort overall.

Well, i've never read a poem like this before. but it was well written for sure. i'm not particularly favorable in this kind of poem but it was still nicely written.

That was fantastically written...Short but filled with a very unusual idea in it..Good Job.

Nicely written i love it it makes perfect since 5/5