It's very strong in emotions. So many things you've said. Well expressed. Nice flow in it. It's little long but enjoyable at the same time. Well written!

Wow, amazing poem. i enjoyed each stanza and each line well done.

"People have their ways of playing tricks with our minds,
looking deeper into their actions it's emptiness one finds.
It's always a lie that breaks everything apart,
left standing confused, with no way to start"

yes i agree, people have thier own way on playing tricks and it's always a lie that breaks everything apart.

"Boy, life ain't no game to play with your rules,
not everyone can be taken and used like tools.
Boy, this ain't the ride that goes your way,
you gotta learn that you'll lose one day"
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my favorite part

This may have been kinda long but after the first two stanza's I was hooked. I literally couldn't stop reading! This poem really stood out and spoke to my soul.

"Boy, life ain't no game to play with your rules,
not everyone can be taken and used like tools.
Boy, this ain't the ride that goes your way,
you gotta learn that you'll lose one day"

^^^THIS WAS AMAZING!! Truly inspiring it really was. I can relate to this so much. You have a lot of talent. If you post up more poems and would like me to read them message me ok? Keep it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken~