Melissa,

This piece was really beautiful. I honestly don't know how to express the joy and happiness this poem brang me. So much truth was etched into your words.

The simplicity you portrayed here was effective and created such a stunning feeling over the atmosphere. Usually i'm not the fan of love poems and have only liked a few on this site due to the fact they can seem quite cliche and re-written many times before.

You took this poem and wrote something very different and I admire that. Every message which you wrote here was truthful and had such a deep meaning.

Well done on writing such a beautiful poem with a lovely essence.

~Mel

A cleverly written piece. Now this is the kind of poem I like to see on the boards!

Thought provoking and the flow was good. Excellent job!

My friend, you are masterful in your writing and use of language. I have missed your writing tremendously. Because of my health and my work schedule I have not read much lately but it is nice to see you are still able to put an angels touch to the words you write.

Very good, I liked it alot

Ha!! well written and very clever...

I love the final five lines and read them with satisfacion several times. Brilliant!!