Comments : My story (Part 1)

  • 15 years ago

    by CrossCut

    I loved it!
    You put a lot of feeling into it and a lot of strong description.
    Keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by REESEY

    I liked it.......:)

  • 15 years ago

    by dandelion

    ..ang ganda cous..saya...ahahaha
    miszyah..love you.

  • 15 years ago

    by Andy

    Brilliant poem!
    very well written and explained :)
    this is proble my favourite part about your poem
    "My heart was pounding..I don't know what to do
    It's like my world suddenly stopped revolving"

    Amazing :):)

    and its not 1/5 or below at all, haha!
    5/5 most deffinatly :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is a really nice poem, really enjoyed it. Its like a story that keeps keeping you interested. Hey start believing in yourself, your work is great, really loved it. Keep up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    It was actually awesome..
    i actually can relate to it since im goin through the same thing..
    and don't worry about not bein good or anythin..you'll improve over time. :D
    keep up the good work.. :)