Good flow and word choice. I think it was cleverly done. Excellent job on this form.

This poem was wonderful! I see how hard this type of poem can be to write but you did it so well. I love the idea of a blue heart. 5/5

Wow...such a sad poem. Somehow the formed poetry seems to enhance the feeling underneath. Very good job on the form!

Take care,

Ingrid

Great job Jeannie..Welcome back :)
WE all missed you.
Love cindy

This is so sweet am luvin this so much!!!
da best poem story i'd had evr read!!!!
keep ti up hunz hope u reed myns

Great Lento! Beautifully crafted as always! Love the title and the rhyming and flow are both excellent.