Comments : A few broken pieces

  • 10 years ago

    by faria

    Very gooood..poem
    i liked..itt
    very..nicee
    but could of ended it..better
    but still..good job..
    keep it up..xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    I know those feelings all to well =(
    but you expressed them beautifully! =)
    keep it up and great job!