Please read this whole thing because I spent alot of time on it and I think it is really good

Wow..
i love it...
I can really sense your emotion,
and that you really cared about this girl.
I am really sorry that this happened to you. ...
:[ No one deserves that.
Keep on writing :]
5/5

Peace :]

Wow! That was a great poem!!! You put all your emotion into it great job!!! And if this is a true story about your life put your chin up high in the air and forget about her she's not worth it! 5/5

Damn dude you write good. i like it... i know how you feel and can relate just as well...

I dont like people who cheat it sucks so bad
i had a boyfriend who did that to me only
it was with my best friend
but the poem is good i think it is
but on this part

what about when me made out
not too long ago
did he know about it then
or were you being a sick ho

i think you mean we not me

Whoever could not read this whole thing is sick. this is awesome. i love how well you showed how much it hurt and how angry you are. however, i completely relate to not being able to show the depths of those emotions through your words. excellent.

--TheGothicAlbino

Wow that was an exellent poem. You showed alot of emotion in it. I know what it feels like to believe a lier and it hurts. If this story is true I would forget about her she doesnt deserve someone who can write like that.

Whoa i like it i know how you feel ppl are stupid and i hate twotimers! ugh ppl are so cruel good job expressing your emotions! 5/5 xxx <33

I know how you feel! well for a girls point of view! this is an amazing poem! keep writing!

5/5

Nick nicely done. Very nice.

Haha that gave me a little tinggle in my stomic i loved the poem i know these feelings in the poem all to well i loved it keeping write you got talent to the max i wish i could give you more but 5/5 is the max

She thinks the poem is a joke, well your relation ship appears to have been a joke. You write with raw emotions, and I am sorry, for you. You obviously seemed to have cared for this girl quite a bit. Just reading into it, sorry if I mis-interpreted it. I may keep saying this but you write with such raw emotions and convey them so well, your poems make me smile, not because that is their intent, but because it is so rare to find such a mass of one concentrated emotion in a poem.