This one gave me goosebumps..!!!
beautiful

Amazing...im just speechless. I dont know what to say, it was just simply amazing. Sad, but an excellent write. nice work. 5/5

A round of applause.

well were can i even start you had so many different types of sorrow within one poem that its hard to start going through them all.
you covered some every important topics in this depressing but important to be discussed so that people can understand and see the harm. its a brave poem to have written. but i gota say it was written well, wrote very simply,and not very complex so that it can be easily understood. but isn't that always the way? when you have something that means alot to you and you wanted to write it, complicated poetry techiques and vocabulary go out the window..well they do for me. it was from the heart and thats what matters.

also i must say that a positive ending to a poem like that is a breath of fresh air, if you didn't read the title, you would think that there would be a death or sucide at the end, but standing up and saying i won't put up with the shxt hes putting me through is something which should be said more often it gives girls and guys more will power to stand up for there self. so in a moral way this poem is fantastic.

to be critical certain parts of it don't really flow so re read it once more and you'll see what i mean kk xxxxxxx

The flow is great. A fantastic write!