Wow this poem is beautiful but in a haunting way its chilling but amazing the emotion is so beautifully expressed! its going in my fav you are so talented! 5/5

I really love this one alot!
Wonderful job

Like the death part you really get to the point in your poems i liked this poem

Needs more to it but a good start

I loved it. Definalty a 5/5 to me!!

Love it.

I really like this. Its my favirte one you wrote. Its pretty deep. Is their a story behind it?

I really loved your poem and I truely loved your dark imagination.
well done 5\5.

Its good it seems real deep =] great job

I love the tought of the end of the world or even people dieing(i'm not insane but i am kinda joking)

This has great visualization the only thing is is this one need a bit more length to adress the tension and fear this is capable of keep writing and comment back if you like

Nice, i like a good twisted read now and then.

A decent poem.
Not my kind of poem but I liked it.

Wow

I like these kind of poems, short and sweet, but to the point. I really enjoyed this read, and expect great things from you hun. Take care <3

"Life may be a road, but there is always a happy ending."

Love the spark to inferno reference, the little things do sometime have the biggest impact. nice work

Good imagery. Leaving the thesis open for the reader to determine on their own really sets the mood of the writing.

Wow this was dark and deep full of sumthing else i cant get off my mind. it was WOW!!! i love it. an amazing job here. keep it up!! =)

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Very interesting poem, I liked it 5/5

Wow. this is so far the best poem i have read from you.
niice work