I think this poem is interesting it different and it leaves you thinking its like getting a breath of fresh air. its different its nice to read a poem wit a different story other than you broke up wit your bf/gf or you are in love! i like the subject of the poem it gives you a glimpse of the complicated mind of a murder
as for the writing i think it was really well done i like the stanza and you choice of words and the flow was amazing nicely done! 5/5

Wowwwww...this is really so awesome..I loved the flow of ur poem honestly ...
" never believed in forever"..these are my favorite words..
good job,keep it up:)5/5..

Wow, this is very good. i loved reading this, is was very unique. i loved how u ended it.

I really liked how you did it in the murders view instead of the victim,
very nicely written madam
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This sent a shiver up my spine, good job. the last stanza was def my fav, added a touch of madness to the mix. keep it up

Unique; awesome.

Very sensual without being crude, nice job!