Comments : Hands held out

  • 9 years ago

    by Iris

    This poem is very well written!!well done!5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jaymz

    Very nicely written

  • 9 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Oh wow. this is amazingly powerful. i love it. 5/5!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Ok, this is actually my fav poem written by you so far. the rhyming went together perfect, it made so much sense in such a painful way. your saying i have skills, i am jealous of the way you can write. you can take sweet inocent nursery rhymes and turn them into soemthing dark and scary and mysterious and so your own. great poem. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by stella

    Brilliant<3