This poem is very well written!!well done!5/5

Very nicely written

Oh wow. this is amazingly powerful. i love it. 5/5!!!

Ok, this is actually my fav poem written by you so far. the rhyming went together perfect, it made so much sense in such a painful way. your saying i have skills, i am jealous of the way you can write. you can take sweet inocent nursery rhymes and turn them into soemthing dark and scary and mysterious and so your own. great poem. 5/5

Brilliant<3