Wow, awesome. I can really relate to this one. Keep up the great work Shanik

A really deep and heartfelt poem. I think that your style truly accomodates your writing so well.
If all that you see is pain, think about trying to look things in a different perspective.

Wow that was very sad! i so can feel the pain in your heart! and i can relate because i would cut myself for the guy i so in love with. so great poem! keep up with the good work! 5/5

Wow . i loved this. it was amazing. i can relate too .... keep writing. your amazing.

--aprilsconspiracy