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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is truly a beautiful poem, don't know why no one has commented on it yet!

    "The winds rustle the greenery,
    Bringing whispers from the past.
    The flowers bloom extraordinarily,
    Their vibrance made to last."

    Great rhyming and this was such a soothing and calming stanza.

    I have some ideas for the title, how about: "Whispers From The Past", and "Everlasting Life"-just some ideas.
    But anyway, good work.
    Keep writing, always and forever....