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  • 15 years ago

    by Ixora

    What a wonderful poem. It sounds like it is direct at one person but I think it could serve well in governmental criticism as well. I suppose the poem delievers something to every person and that's when you know something is truly wonderful poetry. I also like the line "Why don't you just listen?"...if more people listened the world would be a..calmer...if nothing else, place. Great job hun!

    .[Bow].